The recommendation under review
“We recommend consolidating the two regional support teams under one operating lead beginning in Q1.”
The recommendation is close. One dependency needs to be made explicit before it goes out.
The recommendation depends on the CRM migration completing on schedule. The memo does not explain what changes if that milestone slips.
Make the dependency explicit and state what changes if the assumption fails.
The case is well organized and clearly written. The risk is not the wording — it is the unstated dependency. Name it, and the recommendation holds up under questions.


